Thursday, November 11, 2010

Writing Time!!!

This is my story
For 2 weeks we have been working on the story revising and editing. I was working on a story of my dog, Kettle. First we fixed our proper nouns. (names and places) Second we fixed all the places that needed commas. Third we had to make sure that are have a good beginning and ending. Then we started to post our stories.


By Jaclyn

1 comment:

  1. I love to read the stories from the class! Keep up the great work!

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